Globalization has some positive and negative effects. It has
caused climate change and
deforestation by developing international trade around the world. This is
because many multinational companies establish their enterprises in countries
which have poor or a lack of environmental policies, and it can adversely
affect the global environment. Some pollution caused by globalization, such as
burning of coal, not only affects the original country, but can also spread to
other parts of the world. However, globalization helps to connect the world and
the sharing of ideas and information around the world has become instantaneous;
this helps to raise public awareness of the global environmental issues,
such as global warming. Although there were some improvements in global
environmental conservation which have been carried out by some nations recently, the reluctance of some governments, such as the United
States, has resulted in the inefficiency of the United Nations in addressing
the global environmental problems. Therefore, the collaboration and willingness
of governments in different nations play an important role in reducing global
environmental deterioration.
Globalization leads(wrong word) some positive and negative effects. It has been denounced as a cause of climate change and deforestation by developing the(redundant) international trade around the world, as many multinational companies establish their manufactories(A new word!!!) in countries where(wrong word) have poor or (^)lack of environmental policies, and can adversely affect the global environment. Globalization has caused (^)reduction of forestland in(wrong word) a large scale due to the increased logging and most of the governments have declined to implement appropriate solution(word form). Some pollution caused by globalization, such as burning of coal, not only affects its(wrong word) original country, but can also spread to other parts of the world. However, globalization helps to connect the world together(redundant) and the sharing of ideas and information around the world become(Tense) instantaneous; this helps to raise public awareness on the global environmental issues, such as global warming. Although there are some improvements in global environmental conservation which were carried out by some nations recently, the reluctance and incapability(Another new word!!!) of some states, such as the United States, have resulted in the inefficiency of the United Nations in addressing the global environmental problems. Therefore, the collaboration and willingness of governments in different states(??) play an important role in reducing the(red) global environmental deterioration.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Teacher! below is my correction: Globalization has some positive and negative effects. It has caused climate change and deforestation by developing the international trade around the world. This is because many multinational companies establish their enterprises in countries which have poor or are lack of environmental policies, and can adversely affect the global environment. Globalization has caused the reduction of forestland on a large scale due to the increased logging and most of the governments have declined to implement appropriate solutions. Some pollution caused by globalization, such as burning of coal, not only affects the original country, but can also spread to other parts of the world. However, globalization helps to connect the world and the sharing of ideas and information around the world has become instantaneous; this helps to raise public awareness on the global environmental issues, such as global warming. Although there are some improvements in global environmental conservation which were carried out by some nations recently, the reluctance of some governments, such as the United States, has resulted in the inefficiency of the United Nations in addressing the global environmental problems. Therefore, the collaboration and willingness of governments in different nations play an important role in reducing global environmental deterioration.
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